Love in Concrete

Amor en Concreto

 

 

Script

by

Franco de Peña

and

Antoine Vivas Denisov 

 

 

English translation

Original script in spanish language

 

 

Caracas-Berlin June-2001

 

 

 

 

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Second Draft, June 28th, 2001.

 


Reg. Nº 135977-02  Writer’s Guild of America Nueva York 22-05-2000


1.- EXT. LIBERTADOR AVE.. CARLOS' TAXI. NIGHT.

Deep in the middle of the night. Carlos (49 years old, a small tuft of hair slicked back, long face and deep-set eyes, Argentinean immigrant) drives at a moderate pace looking in all directions as he goes. He is singing at the top of his lungs, accompanying a Carlos Gardel tape playing in his corroded old Ford Farline 500 with its seats, reupholstered one too many times. He is accompanied by a male voice singing falsetto in the background.  

CARLOS

(Lyrics of the tango)

Si arrastré por este mundo la vergüenza de haber sido y el dolor del ya no ser, ... bajo el ala del sombrero...  Era para mi la vida entera, como un sol de primavera mi esperanza y mi pasión, ahora cuesta abajo en mi rodada, las ilusiones pasadas yo no las puedo arrancar

The avenue is abandoned and desolate. We are near a side street which joins LIBERTADOR AVe.. The avenue’s modern overhead roof is composed of rhythmical, concrete beams.

fadeout

fade in:  The title appears :

 Love in Concrete

cont. scene 1

Carlos' voice, together with the passenger's, grows from Moderato to Fortissimo, and while he sings lower, she reaches soprano notes and a climax in the music.

2.-  ext. TONY’s house. NIGHT.

TONY and his FATHER are arguing in front of the main door  of their house. (a two floors style 40’s house)

FATHER

You have nothing, and with nothing you are nobody. If you want to live here, you have to accept that I make the rules and everyone has to respect them. And if you don't accept them then you can get the hell out of here.

TONY

Quit preaching! I'll do whatever I want!

FATHER

Not in my house.

The Father looks at him for a second, then takes and pushes him by the shoulders, and gestures for him to leave. Tony tries to avoid getting thrown out.

FATHER

Get out!

TONY

Times have changed... Haven't you noticed? Get real.

The FATHER pushes TONY, and then furious, slaps his son powerfully once in the face.

FATHER

You'd better show me some respect, boy!

The FATHER shuts the door in Tony's face. Tony touches his cheek.

TONY

(yelling angrily, humiliated)

Dad, open up!

From the street, we can see his FATHER in a window of the house.  Tony  beats the door desperately.

FATHER

In my house I won't allow thieves, nor good-for-nothings, druggies or homos. In my time, I studied and worked. Hit the books, show some respect, admit I was right, then we'll talk.  

Having said this, his FATHER turns off the light and shuts the window. Tony's reaction is unexpected. He pauses for an instant, pressing his face to the metal door. Then he hits the door a couple more times and finally gives it a solid kick. 

TONY

Old man! 

He turns in his exasperation and searches for something on the ground. He finds a stone and throws it at the windows of his house. We hear the sound of broken glass falling to the ground and furious shouting from his FATHER. His FATHER, furious, opens the door, and TONY escapes.

FATHER

When I lay my hands on you I'll teach you how to be a little real man. 

Tony runs away down the street.

3.- EXT. LIBERTADOR AVE. NIGHT.

Tony runs across the street corner intersecting at Libertador Ave. He is both sobbing and weeping.

He takes the stairs  which lead to the lower level of the avenue. When he reaches the bottom he stops racing and begins to walk in the right hand lane of the avenue. Tony continues to cry.

4.- INT. CLAUDIA'S CAR. LIBERTADOR AVE.. NIGHT.

Claudia and Alvaro, an upper middle class professional couple are driving in their car.  Alvaro (45) drives. Aside Claudia(39) sits. They return from a party, elegantly dresses. They discuss in the car.

CLAUDIA

We cannot continue this way living!. All this lost sense.

Alvaro makes a short pause.

ALVARO

If you don't like this country, you leave to your motherland and that’s.

CLAUDIA

I am not speaking about the country!. You know exactly what I’m talking about.

ALVARO

Stop making me scenes... The dinner  was delicious. They seen to be a distinguish family.

CLAUDIA

Alvaro... I want the separation!

Alvaro accelerates to a maximum. Claudia remains in suspense. She buckles up the security belt .

CLAUDIA

Stop it!

5.- EXT. LIBERTADOR AVe. HÉCTOR'S MOTORCYCLE. NIGHT.

On the same avenue, on a 500cc Yamaha, Héctor Ruiz (25 years old) accelerates at full speed, making a tremendous racket with his muffler. He is accompanied by his girlfriend Yamila Yajaira Gómez on the back seat. They need to yell to hear each other above the deafening noise of the motorcycle. 

HECTOR

You'll see, everything will be ok. We'll get the money and we'll have the time of our lives living off the muses of this city.

YAMILA YAJAIRA

Sure thing, honey-bee.

HECTOR

And we're gonna get out of this shit-hole, 'cause Lopez is an asshole if he thinks I'm going to stay a Mr. Nobody all my life.

YAMILA YAJAIRA

Of course not, sweetie.

HECTOR

 (singing)

All I need is a honey, who looks like a princess with pockets full of money! My queen!

YAMILA YAJAIRA

Woweeeee…!

He accelerates and roars around a corner, leaving behind an echo of noise.

6.- EXT. LIBERTADOR AVE.. NIGHT.

Carlos continues to drive along LIBERTADOR AVe..

CLEMENCIA

Gardel’s songs always make me feel happy.

CARLOS

(pompous)

What would a poor devil like you know about happiness?

(with emphasis)

Let me explain: Happiness is love and the possibility of being loved.

Clemencia shamelessly makes fun of Carlos’ pedantic and solemn tone.

CLEMENCIA

(equally serious)

His majesty hath spoken! The taxi driver, the Casanova of Caracas’ prostitutes!

CARLOS

(turning around to look at her)

What? You think it’s funny?

(he stares at her)

Ever since I first met her we have looked each other straight in the eyes…

(he gestures perfectly)

As if we wanted to dance…

(absorbed in thought)

Her eyes were shining. She was fragile, slender and had elegant hands. A deep and sensual voice…

CLEMENCIA

Look out!

Clemencia screams because Carlos almost runs into the pedestrian who is ambling down the right lane of the avenue. Braking suddenly, Carlos avoids driving into Tony (19, dressed like all the other young people his age, delicate features, clean-shaven).

CARLOS

Damn it, idiot! Get the hell out of the street.

Tony continues walking unperturbed, ignoring the car and Carlos’ angry honking of his horn.

CARLOS

Get moving! You don’t think life is sweet, or what?!

 

7.- EXT. LIBERTADOR AVE. HÉCTOR'S MOTORCYCLE. NIGHT.

Suddenly, Héctor, who was riding his motorcycle with his girlfriend in the previous scene, screeches his brakes to avoid crashing into the taxi himself, almost causing an accident.

HECTOR

Goddamn you asshole! Move it!

 

8.- INT. CLAUDIA'S CAR. LIBERTADOR AVE.. NIGHT.

CLAUDIA

Put an end to this farse I’m telling you!

From afar they see the blinking emergency lights on Carlos’ car and Héctor’s motorcycle and they are forced to slow down to keep a prudent distant. They hear Carlos’ intense, loud horn. In the middle of the avenue, Tony continues along his way. The taxi cannot proceed on its journey because of Tony and inches his way behind him.

CLAUDIA

What could have happened?

ALVARO

I don’t know but I’m not going to stop here so that they can attack us and rob us clean.

 

9.- EXT. LIBERTADOR AVE.. TAXI. NIGHT.

CARLOS

(to Tony)

Out of the way, idiot! You think you’re some beauty queen walking down a catwalk?!

Carlos honks his horn, more and more annoyed. Héctor, on the other hand, yells at the taxi driver.

HECTOR

Out of the road, Argentinean wanker!

10.- INT. CLAUDIA'S CAR.LIBERTADOR AVE.. NIGHT.

     ALVARO

These damn criminals are not going to fuck with me.

Alvaro takes the stun gun out of the glove compartment. Claudia jostles Alvaro, taking the gun from him and she puts it back into the glove compartment.

CLAUDIA

Hey, calm down! Can’t you see, nothing’s happening.

ALVARO

Hey, woman, don’t contradict me.

A car alarm and Alvaro’s yelling blends into Carlos’ blaring horn. Alvaro is driving the car wearing white golf gloves.

ALVARO

(yelling at everyone outside, losing his temper)

Fucked up criminals!

 

11.- EXT. LIBERTADOR AVE.. NIGHT.

A moment of chaos. Now a street cleaning truck joins the line of cars. A beggar appears near one of the bridges which run over the avenue. He is declaiming a midnight serenade to the moon, bottle in hand. Utterly scornful, his hair long and dirty, he yells:

BEGGAR

(at the top of his lungs, somewhat rhetorically and slurring his words)

Noticing your shapeliness, I was struck and wondered, oh precious and beloved moon,  Only I know your secret.

Behind the beggar, the wind makes wobble an indicative post that says: ”LIBERATION AVENUE.” The beggar unzips his pants and urinates with a dense stream upon the lower level of the avenue. It resembles a rural scene from a Breugel painting. The urine falls on the roof of Carlos’s car.

BEGGAR

(sings a children’s song with a childish voice)

Let’s look at the moon eating olives and throwing the seeds in an empty pipe

 

Carlos backs up his car with his tires screeching, and drives off. Héctor follows suite, as do Alvaro and Claudia in their car. Each of them drives off swerving violently and each one in turn yells at Tony as they go by him. The beggar continues his sermon in the distance. Tony walks with his eyes on the ground as if nothing were happening around him. He murmurs something under his breath.  

TONY

(off)

I don't cry because of weakness or anger; I always got the impression that nobody loved me!  I sometimes wonder, why they even brought me into this world if I didn’t have an invitation? Do you really feel invited to life?

CARLOS

off

I’ll fuck you over of these days, you son of a bitch!

TONY

(between clenched teeth, unhearable)

Eat shit, you bastard!

TONY

off

Today for umpteenth time he really wanted to train me to be a male!, for the umpteenth time he kicked me out of the house, but for the first time it was me who decided to leave.   

Beggar

(rambling on in an apocalyptic tone)

Nobody shall know your secrets because we live in a worly without pity, a world of cynics. The day will come when you descend from the skies with your seven trumpets sounding catastrophes, fire, violence, storms.

off form the Beggar: “Misery will be revealed with opulence because it is written that there are seven capital sins, Oh Moon, magnificent and beautiful, Woman of my dreams.”

Tony observes the poor man following him for quite some time. The beggar is walking along the upper level of the avenue, while Tony takes the lower one.  Tony continues walking straight along the avenue until he is lost from sight on the horizon. 

Tony heads towards the sidewalk, and takes the stairs leading up to the upper level of the avenue.

 

12.-  EXT. LIBERTADOR AVE.. CARLOS' CAR. NIGHT.

Carlos' cab turns back onto the main avenue where groups of women, "ladies of the night", stand on the pavement alongside the walls.

CARLOS

See, as I was saying, there is so much unhappiness on the streets. She is an oasis in this desert!

The cab slows to a halt after having passed the line of women loitering along the avenue. One of _the women, tall and slender, approaches the cab. The cab drives off.  Carlos Gardel continues to sing, slowly fading as the cab drives off.

13.- INT.  LIBERTADOR AVE.. CLAUDIA'S CAR. NIGHT.

Claudia watches Alvaro as he drives, he in turn doesn't turn to look at her at all, annoyed. Claudia bursts out laughing.

CLAUDIA

Goodness, dear, we're going to have to commit you!

Alvaro screeches the car to a halt and stares at her.

ALVARO

You are well aware of what country we're living in, right?

Alvaro drives off, again with tires screeching. After a moment,    Héctor and his girlfriend pass by riding on the motorcycle. Héctor observes them, and vice versa.

CLAUDIA

Look at that couple - I'm sure they have less than we do and are much happier!!

Alvaro accelerates, passing them again.

 

14.- EXT. LIBERTADOR AV. TRANSVESTITES. NIGHT.

The slender figure heads towards the other ”women” who are standing on an overhead pedestrian bridge. The bridge unites over the walled-in avenue.

CLEMENCIA

How are things going, Libertad?

Libertad has her hair done up the way the Argentinean actress, Libertad Lamarque, used to wear hers

LIBERTAD

From bad to worse. With the cold, the men in this city don't want to stand and come out for a walk.

They speak and gesture like the neighbourhood women waiting in a Laundromat.  

CLEMENCIA

That's strange, the cold doesn't bother me a bit. The truth is, the night started extremly badly...   Did Giovanni come?

libertad

No Giovanni what so ever came! The only ones who already passed several times were the policemen, racketing!

Clemencia

 sad

It’s a pitty. He said that when he returns he’ll take me out for dinner.

LIBERTAD

You are a so naif dreamer!. How many times I have told you not to give your ass to anybody for free. Men are able to say any thing in order to fuck and not to pay.

CLEMENCIA

I might sound stupid, but I do believe that one day I’ll find someone who loves me, you’ll see!. The worst is ... They can’t imagine we’re just opening up shop.

LIBERTAD

You're going to be the one to open up shop because mine is closed due to the weather. Darling!

 

Suddenly, the canon of a war tank and then the tank itself appears behind them and slows to a stop. They are astonished by this strange appearance. Libertad sees it first.

LIBERTAD

(whispering)

Pinch me!

CLEMENCIA

(also whispering)

What’s the matter with you?

Libertad points to the tank and they are both dumbstruck before this strange appearance.  The hatch opens and a Soldier peers out.

CLEMENCIA

(turns around and whispers to herself)

Oh my God.

SOLDIER

Good morning ladies...

Could you tell me which way is it to the Presidential Palace?

CLEMENCIA

(whispering into Libertad’s ear)

Stay calm - men with guns and in uniform are my speciality.

(addressing the soldier)

You go straight and at the end of the avenue, you take a right. Then you’ll reach Pantheon Avenue.

LIBERTAD

No, what are you saying, it’s in the other direction! At the light, about two blocks away, you take a left, and cross the avenue. There, the second house has a blue door. Ring the doorbell and the president will open it for you.

CLEMENCIA

(scolding Libertad through gritted teeth)

You’re directing him to your own house, woman!

LIBERTAD

Hey, poor thing, they’ll kill him in a war soon.

CLEMENCIA

Don’t get him all confused, you’ve never gone to visit the president.

(to the soldier)

Go straight, Lovey.

SOLDIER

Thank you. Good night, ladies.

The Soldier disappears down the hatch and the tank resumes its crawl.

LIBERTAD

What is going on? Now, I'm really heading in. I’m finished for tonight.

 

Libertad walks carefully away from the bridge. Clemencia is left standing alone.

15.- EXT. LIBERTADOR AVe. HECTOR' MOTORCYCLE. NIGHT.

Héctor drives by with his girlfriend Yamila.

YAMILA

Honey one! What if they catch you?

HÉCTOR

Don't worry! I’ll manage everything.

The motorcycle begins to sputter.

HECTOR

What a shit life! Isn’t there going to be a time when we get to seize the day?

The motorcycle continues to sputter and finally dies, stopping in the middle of the avenue. They get off the motorcycle and Héctor gives his muffler a kick.

HECTOR

Damn it!

When Héctor kicks the muffler, he also hurts his foot.

HECTOR.

Ouch!!

 

Yamila Yajaira can't keep from laughing at him.

HECTOR

What are you laughing at? I Héctor Wilkelmann Ruiz Graterol, grandson of Ol' Ruiz, swear by the most holy of holies, that you'll never see me set foot in that poor-hole or any other like it again. OK!!!

Ahead of them in the distance, the crazy man unrinates facing the moon. He declaims to the winds as he walks.

16.- EXT. A WALKWAY RUNNING OVER LIBERTADOR AVE.. NIGHT.

We see the cars speeding by, hear their whizzing noise. We see Tony on the edge of the walkway which does not have safety banisters because they have been stolen. He throws little pebbles at the cars driving below. The bridge he is standing on passes over the subterranean Libertador Avenue. Each car slices the air, leaving behind a sharp, quickly receding noise. Tony senses a certain danger in his position – he risks losing his balance and plunging down.

He is being observed by Clemencia, one of the women who travelled in Carlos' taxi.

CLEMENCIA

(in a strange, virile voice)

Are you looking for adventure, or what?

_Bent over his body, Tony sees Clemencia’s feminine, high-heeled legs.

Tony lift his head to see her better. In the half-light of the night, barely lit by the street lamps, he sees that she is tall, well-figured, athletically built and dressed in a tight dress… very sexy… After this appraisal, he ignores her and laconically spits out a few words in her direction.

TONY

Go to hell!

Clemencia is perplexed and stands at a distance, approaching him cautiously. Clearly, she has not understood what he said. In the background, a luminous neon sign advertising beer, swings in the night breeze. She watches Tony’s silent sobs.

CLEMENCIA

What did you say?

TONY

I said, get lost!

At this point, she grabs him aggressively by the arm pulling him to herself, and distancing him from the rim of the bridge. She believes he is contemplating jumping.

CLEMENCIA

What do you think you're doing? You still believe angels can fly?

They both fall ostentatiously to the sidewalk, on top of one another. Tony continues to wrestle furiously with her until he immobilizes her.

TONY

Are you crazy, or what?

CLEMENCIA

You're the one who's crazy.

Clemencia gets up, and pulls him up, too. She adjusts her skirt and shakes off his pants. Clemencia notices the boy’s eyes are damp from crying.  

TONY

Don't touch me, leave me alone.

Tony heads to the edge of the bridge and resumes his walk along it's rim leaving Clemencia behind. Clemencia walks parallel to him while he walks along the edge, keeping no more than a meter behind him. Tony ignores her. The cars continue to speed by beneath him. 

CLEMENCIA

It's a nice night. Want to grab a beer?

TONY

(repeats  monotonously)

I told you, go to hell!

CLEMENCIA

Hey, son, what bad manners - I invite you to  go to a bar for a beer, and you invite me to hell. Are you by any chance too busy?

Tony a bit disconcerted, does not know what to say.

TONY

Can't you just leave me alone?

He leans out over the edge. Clemencia observes him, then takes him securely by the arm and pushes him towards the street. She pretends to push him.

CLEMENCIA

Alright already. Jump. Go ahead, throw yourself. If that's what you want, do it.

Tony grows rigid in Clemencia's grasp. 

TONY

Jesus! I don't want to jump!

 

From a distance, a police car is driving in their direction, its patrol lights are turned on and the siren is blaring. Clemencia watches him.  Gradually, the siren's noise  grows more intense. 

CLEMENCIA

(staring at Tony)

Let's go!.....C'mon, run!

TONY

What's happening?

 

CLEMENCIA

I'm telling you to run.

 

Clemencia takes him by the hand and runs towards the stairs which join Solano Avenue.

They watch the patrol car with its lights flashing, sounding the alarm ever more loudly, but it glides down the other side of the street. Clemencia looses one of her evening shoes. Tony goes to pick the shoe up, and returning he sees the patrol car only 250 meters away.

TONY

(jokingly)

Cinderella!

CLEMENCIA

Run, you idiot, you don't know what it like to be fucked by a cop.

Clemencia spins around taking her shoe, grabs his hand and they clamber down the stairs to the sidewalk below on Solano Avenue. They jump a low wall and hide behind it. We hear the police siren in the distance.

17.- EXT. BEHIND THE WALL. SABANA GRANDE. NIGHT.

Cramped in their hiding place behind the wall, Tony and Clemencia are forcibly pressed up against each other. The siren can still be heard approaching in the distance.

TONY

(looking at Clemencia’s breasts)

Hey... Hey...

CLEMENCIA

(whispering)

Shush!

Their mouths and breaths are also very close, and this closeness creates a certain forced eroticism. Especially since neither of them wants to touch the other.

TONY

(still looking at her breasts)

Are you a he or a she?

 

Clemencia shrugs her shoulders as if to say she doesn't know.

CLEMENCIA

(between clenched teeth)

I told you to be quiet!

 

TONY

Are you for real?

Clemencia lowers her eyes.

CLEMENCIA

What do you think?

Tony observes her. CLEMENCIA watches him as well.

 TONY

What’s your name?

CLEMENCIA

They call me Clemencia, and you?

TONY

Tony…

 

The patrol car stops. They hear the police shouting… The police hesitate then head towards the sidewalk stopping at the corner. We can hear their running footsteps  slapping the pavement. Tony tries to say something but Clemencia signals for him to be quiet by pressing her fingers to his lips. Their breathing grows heavier in anticipation.

We hear the policemen approaching. They grow silent and stare intensely at each other. The police motion for silence, guns in hand. They motion that someone is behind the wall.

POLICEMAN 1

Here kitty, kitty, kitty… I think it's getting hotter...!

Clemencia  signals to Tony to stay quiet. She takes off her necklace and rings, and takes the money out of her purse.

POLICEMAN 2

Here kitty, kitty… Smells like a pussy...cat!

Clemencia motions that she is going out there, and gives him the necklace, rings and money.

CLEMENCIA

(whispering)

See you 'round!

 

 

TONY

(whispering)

What about the beer...?

 

Clemencia emerges from the dark corner. She walks like a queen.

CLEMENCIA

How annoying - you can't even pee in this city without being interrupted!

 

  POLICEMAN 2

Look at who we've got here... it's Clemencia!

Policeman 1 assaults Clemencia taking her wallet.

POLICEMAN 1

Let's see what's in here... 

CLEMENCIA

Nothing...

POLICEMAN 1

Not enough catch in these stormy seas?

 

Clemencia snatches the wallet out of his hands, and then he grabs it back more aggressively.

POLICEMAN 2

You’d better be nice…

Tony overhears everything from behind the wall.

POLICEMAN 1

What do you say we go for a little walk?

 

CLEMENCIA

I get paid to walk the streets.

 

POLICEMAN 2

You know who's the boss here?... You're my man!...

The policemen laugh, and put Clemencia into a ”cage” [Trans: a caged compartment in the back of the police car]. They drive off. Tony hears the siren wailing into the distance.

18.- INT. BAR ”YESTERDAY”. night.

A bar, lit with punctual lights of various warm colours. A hugely fat woman on the stage, middle-aged and dressed in a tight dress with a low neckline, gesticulates vehemently and expressively while singing a love song. She is singing a bolero.  The room is completely in the shadows and one can only see the audience's faces half lit by the light of their cigarettes. She's holding a flower and her dress is much too tight but her act is very sexy, Caribbean-style.

CARMEN

(singing)

[translation of the song: I thought you were different, thought you were sincere, but you're just like the other girls, I'm so sorry, so sorry...]

Carlos drinks alone, seated in the corner. He drinks a tequila down in one gulp. An empty bottle stands on his table.

Jacques, an old man of 60, sleeps at the table next to Carlos. Suddenly, he wakes up, looks at his watch and stands up mechanically.

JACQUES

We have met, I am… Jacques…  Jacques, the French Lover!.

bouncing

”A beautiful dick of the glorious past...” That's what they tell me… When this country went bankrupt… I lost everything. Now nobody loves me any more.

Accompanying Jacques is a Fat Hairdresser prostitute with an exaggerated and out of date hairdo constructed of dyed black hair, which suggests her advanced age. She smokes profusely using a cigarette holder and drinks champagne.

HAIRDRESSER

(seated)

 I  was… the favorite hairdresser of all the television stars in the … I had the most Caracas’s luxurious salon… I used to coif  Lupita Ferrer, Susana Dujms, our Miss World… One time, I even did Claudia Cardinale who came to  Caracas for a party at the Hotel Humboldt… Yes my Dear… Me. I’m the famous Madame “Tusau”!  

The Fat Hairdresser and drunken Jacques  argue and lament their glorious pasts.

Jacques

to Carlos

Life is full of surprises…

Carlos isn't really paying attention to what they are saying. He is asleep

carmen

(singing)

translation of the song:

Don’t play with the games of the destiny

our souls cannot be split

you left me behind breathless                your sins may remind unforgiven.

 

19.- ext. PASSAGEWAY TO LIBERTADOR-SOLANA AV. NIGHT.

Tony emerges from the hiding place. He passes the stairs leading from la Solana Avenue to Libertador Avenue. Some children are sleeping there. Their's are the faces of the sleeping city, it's atmosphere, noises and alarms of broken into cars, distant police sirens. The city carries within itself a clear sense of danger. We hear the sounds of a thief running, a gunshot firing, the screams of a victim stripped of their possessions. We see no gun or police.  

A "glue sniffing" street boy calls out; Tony thinks the boy's talking to him.

STREET BOY

Yo', give me back my chain necklace, it was a present from my ol' lady.

 (murmuring),

 c'mon, buddy, give it back!

20.- INT. BAR ”YESTERDAY”. night.

Carlos wakes-up, giving a strong ovation, a frenetic and euphoric reaction. Carmen ends singing making a reverence to the public. When the song is ended. But there is not longer public and show, the local is empty. There is only the cleaning staff in the bar. The show is over.

Cleaning man

Sorry sir, but I’m not a good singer

 

Carlos gets up and slowly leaves the locale.

21.- EXT. and INT. carlos’s pension. night-DAWN

Carlos parks his car in the street. He goes to the door of the pension, a 50 year old, one story. He moves secretively, entering through the patio. A dog pursues him, snapping at his pants.

CARLOS

Scram,  Guachito,  don't be breaking my balls!

He tries to open the door without making any noise with the keys. The dog begins to bark. From inside the house we hear Mrs. María scream: ”Misia Josefa, let‘s see if  Mr. Carlos has arrived, the dog‘s barking.”

22.- INT. Carlos’s room. DAWN.

Carlos enters the room quickly and closes the door, but the dog continues barking. Mrs. María approaches the pension room. She sticks her hand through the window, and runs her fingers along the curtain. Simultaneously, Carlos hides under the bed.

JOSEFA

Mr. Carlos, has the shameless gentleman arrived?

Carlos hears Mrs. María calling him. She appears by the window but doesn't see him. The dog barks incessantly, and finally jumps through the window and enters the bedroom. It begins to bark at him under the bed.

JOSEFA

Mrs. María, the dog got into Carlos' room, bring me the keys!

Under the bed, Carlos signals to the dog to keep quiet while it snaps at his pants. Josefa goes to look for the keys. At that moment, Carlos takes the dog and throws it out of the window. Josefa returns and observes that the dog has left the room.

JOSEFA

Mr. Carlos!

Still under the bed Carlos begins to laugh in silence, and has a laughing attack.

CARLOS

(Off)

Laughing is a way to cry! I‘m 54 years old and there are times that I don't have money to pay the rent. When I arrived in this country, I was 24. I never thought that in 20 years, I would still have these problems.

Carlos wipes his eyes dry, looking in the mirror, revealing the wrinkles and bags under his eyes.

CARLOS

(off)

Today marks the full 20 years since I arrived from my beloved Buenos Aires! Today I knew that I cannot continue lying to myself, something has to change my story, something...

A map of Argentina and a BOCA JUNIOR soccer club poster hang beside the mirror. The wall is covered with marks depicting the days that have passed since he first arrived. Carlos looks at himself in the mirror and holding a deodorant in his hand as if it were a microphone, sings a capella

CARLOS

 (humming)

My beloved Buenos Aires, bla, bla, bla, bla, bla, bla, blaaaaa

23.- EXT. VIEW OF THE AVILA PARK MOUNTAIN. DAWN.

A shaft of light outlines the peaks of the mountains which surround Caracas. The clouds shift from one summit to the next  The city is still in a slumber but undoubtedly the dawn is descending upon the city.

24.- INT. CLAUDIA’s PENTHOUSE/BEDROOM. MORNING.

The morning sunlight illuminates the luxurious bedroom. A comfortable and spacious king size bed dominates the room, antique night tables at each side. Claudia Pérez (39 years old, a mature, well-kept woman with beautiful legs) cannot sleep. She observes the Avila mountains on the horizon. She appears worried.

CLAUDIA

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Today it dawned just as it has every day for the last 15 years, and I don't know why I’m complaining. I don't know why I should cry, I’ve got everything!

Her husband Alvaro  moves in his sleep, on the bed.

I am a perfect wife, an exemplary doctor, an ideal daughter, a socially perfect character, straight out of a successful t.v. soap opera.

 

FLASHback 15 A. PICTURES from CLAUDIA‘s LIFE:

 

An unrealistic montage follows, showing scenes from Claudia's life in quick flashes. They are not photographs but still frames of real life moments.

- the day she married Alvaro;

- graduation day showing her in cap and gown;

- a scene from her medical world, ie. her as pediatrician examining a child.

CLAUDIA

off

Even so, I feel as if something has exploded inside me, and when I‘m sad, I cry at any given moment.

Alvaro is still sleeping beside her. The alarm clock begins to buzz intensely. This Japanese electronic gismo first creates a ruckus then switches the radio on. 

The couple sits up in synchronisation on opposite sides of the bed. For a moment they stay sitting there immobile. Then they swing their legs over the edge of the bed, backs to each other. Without a word, they stand up and put on their slippers. Their silence is complete, only interrupted by the whispers of their clothes and shuffling of their slippers.

Alvaro shakes off his sleepiness when he sees Claudia. He moves sprightly towards the bedroom window where he keeps a rack of weights for weight lifting. Despite his age, Alvaro has stayed in great shape. He does some exercises energetically.

25.- INT. CLAUDIA’s PENTHOUSE/BATHROOM. DAY.

Claudia and Alvaro, stand in front of a large mirror. Each brushes their teeth with an electric toothbrush, making virtually the same movements as the other person does.

Alvaro applies shaving cream to his face with a brush.

Claudia takes off her night-shirt and finds her cream on the Shelf. Next to the cream jar is an electric shaver and blade. She spreads cream over her body. She puts the cream back and takes out another jar. Her hand almost brushes the blade. With gentle, sensual movements, she rubs cream into her face, neck and breasts.

Alvaro places the electric shaver on the built-in sink.

Reaching for her cream on the sink, Claudia cuts herself on her husband’s razor. The cut begins to bleed.

CLAUDIA

I cut myself!

She extends her bleeding finger to her husband for him to see. He ignores her as he slaps after shave cologne on his face. He is completely absorbed with himself.

ALVARO

Put some alcohol on it.

26.- INT. DR. CLAUDIA PEREZ’ PENTHOUSE/BEDROOM. DAY.

Alvaro dresses in front of the mirror, fixing his tie. Claudia  places her doctor’s briefcase on the bed and takes out a Band-Aid.

CLAUDIA

Tomorrow is my grandmother’s birthday... I won’t have time to buy her a present.

 

Alvaro looks back into the mirror.

CLAUDIA

(to herself)

What should I get her?

Her husband grimaces while brushing his suit free of lint.

ALVARO

I don’t kno